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i not like u, y, e, o by ~gedwaylem:icongedwaylem:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


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like a house on fire.
©2009-2010 ~gedwaylem
:icongedwaylem:

Author's Comments

knockin-luminesscent orchestrii
dismantle me-the distillers
runs in the family-amanda palmer

maybe they are one in the same


punchdrunk

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:iconhyperionic-xmissions:
=Hyperionic-Xmissions Aug 10, 2009, 1:02:11 PM
how do you keep coming up with this simple and great stuff?!? :)
:icongedwaylem:
~gedwaylem Aug 10, 2009, 1:05:09 PM
its a curse, and relative.

thank you

--
"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconhyperionic-xmissions:
=Hyperionic-Xmissions Aug 10, 2009, 1:05:46 PM
we should all be so unfortunate :D
:iconalapip:
*alapip Aug 10, 2009, 2:53:47 PM
Gedwaylem,

the habit of a few,
most of whom
would never think
to write it down,
due to when you
speak in such a way
not just a frown,
but groans of pain
are what you gain.

if no one hurts
from what you do,
maybe i shall
try it too.

this is a symptom
is what i mean.
"zigzag" thinking,
it runs in my genes.

when we exchange our
ricochet thoughts,
people stare and
shake their heads,
but we know what
the other says and
nod instead.

yup, we do...

pip

--
when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
:icongedwaylem:
~gedwaylem Aug 11, 2009, 5:08:55 AM
pip,

the relevance of your comment is not only on target, but is the target.
thank you, for your way of responding.
it means a lot to me.

(i'll take flecks of understanding where ican get them and then glue them all together to make a perfectly imperfect world one day.

maybe we all should try this in some way?)

--
"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconalapip:
*alapip Aug 11, 2009, 2:09:54 PM
Gedwaylem,

being different can be great fun
once you realize the advantage
you have over others who only
think in straight lines.

i sincerely hope your recuperation
is going well.

:heart:
pip

--
when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
:iconbeaple:
~Beaple Aug 15, 2009, 8:39:02 PM
How could I NOT like this?

--
You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
:icongedwaylem:
~gedwaylem Aug 15, 2009, 10:27:05 PM
ah im glad, thank you.

--
"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconbeaple:
~Beaple Aug 15, 2009, 11:08:36 PM
One question...where's the "a"? Or have I missed a nugget of something?

--
You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
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