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a flicker of, something by ~gedwaylem:icongedwaylem:



i hid oceans in my pockets,
we spoke
of the logistics of clovers, and you
spun desires into
framed tapestries,
already lined with dust,
perhaps it was an accidental
triangulation-embodying the whiplash
of a 'c'. (the contracts slipped from between my fingers,
and i turned to go

cover my childhood in sheets.)
©2009-2010 ~gedwaylem
:icongedwaylem:

Author's Comments

just some thinking thoughts,
as always
might change

entering this into the 'Creativity is the Bliss of Writing' comp

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:iconyouinventedme:
the close is fantastic

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:icongedwaylem:
thank you very much

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:icondept606:
embodied childhood = sheet-covered whiplash
:iconarsenicope:
Love the images. Beautifully surreal.

Bravo!

:)

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"I'm unclean, a libertine/And every time you vent your spleen,/I seem to lose the power of speech,/You're slipping slowly from my reach.../You grow me like an evergreen--/You never see the lonely me at all."
:icondynoknu:
Nostalgic, and a touch sorrowful, I think... But only in the last little bit. Very nice~

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:toast: :lemon: :absolut: :bug: :coffeecup: :gun:
as if this is the end.
:icongedwaylem:
yesyes.
like split pillowcases lining the walls and hiding beneath dinning room tables

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:icongedwaylem:
thank you=)

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:icongedwaylem:
*nods*, indeed. thank you mu dear, as always

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:icongedwaylem:
*my

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz

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